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| Oct 12, 2006 08:41 pm |
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"Why"
Why must we do these things to each other
Why must we be so cruel to each other
Why can't we just be together withe no worries in our lives
Whymust you care what other think, feel, say or do
We can be together no matter what they say
It doesn't matter how you look
It doesn't matter what they think
It only matters what you feel
The only thing in life I look forwards to is you
I'm not sure what I would do if you weren't here
If only thier simple minds could see this
If only................ |
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| Oct 12, 2006 09:09 pm |
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O.o
*can't write*
Kudos much, I like it :P |
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| Oct 12, 2006 11:00 pm |
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| that's awesome brandon :) |
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| Oct 12, 2006 11:06 pm |
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| Thanks.. I need to post some more of mine... |
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| Oct 12, 2006 11:07 pm |
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| Oct 12, 2006 11:07 pm |
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| Oct 12, 2006 11:08 pm |
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| Oct 12, 2006 11:30 pm |
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Oct 26, 2006 03:07 pm Edited : Oct 26, 2006 03:07 pm |
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| Um..it's a bunch of questions people ask themselves everyday , but if it's a poem, which I am guessing it is look in a dictionary and fine larger better words to use in it's place and make the questions seem more rare and deeper. But still this poem is good to a point where atleast someone is getting there point across..uh..good job then.. |
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