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| Feb 06, 2008 09:01 am |
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Look within my eyes
Feel my fear
See my hatred
Sit within the darkness
See what I see
True colors revealed
No more hiding
It’s my life
Its time I let it die
All the memories gone
Everything taken from me
Its over chose someone else for your game
I’m not a doll you can dress up
Truth reveals the snake within
Lust for blood shown through my eyes
The chains around my neck broken
Now I must say
You have lost more than I have
You gave me a fresh start
In which I must thank you for
You made me stronger
You taught me a lot about myself |
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| Feb 06, 2008 03:00 pm |
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| Feb 06, 2008 03:44 pm |
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| Feb 06, 2008 04:15 pm |
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| that is very unique poem and emotion |
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| Feb 06, 2008 05:57 pm |
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| If you like this poem, I will post the one I am working on when its finished |
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| Jul 25, 2008 11:18 am |
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| i really like it! it reminds me some bad experience |
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| Yesterday 01:03 pm |
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| This is a very good poem, hun! Congrads! Are u a writter ? |
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