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Jan 28, 2007 10:12 am Edited : Jan 28, 2007 10:18 am |
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Stuck with thoughts of another
Cursed with the lack of their person
Wishing those with them harm
Jealousy tearing the mind apart thread by thread
Unravelling morals and standards
Drawing all energy from the heart and mind
Burning up on the inside
Whilst turning blood cold
Wanting no more than her
Willing to do all in my power to succeed
First of seven poems on the seven cardinal sins(edit: It is actually meant to be lust not envy so sorry for that mixup) |
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| Feb 01, 2007 11:55 pm |
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| love the poem, can't wait for the rest. |
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| Feb 03, 2007 08:28 pm |
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| that was an awesome poem( even with the mixup) |
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| Feb 13, 2007 07:30 pm |
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| Feb 14, 2007 03:59 pm |
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| very very nice...i'll post my poem soon too |
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| May 10, 2007 01:18 pm |
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| Very well done cant wait for the rest |
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| May 10, 2007 06:23 pm |
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| Nice one... cant wait to see more of them |
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| May 14, 2007 02:37 pm |
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| i'm confused.............. |
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